下面句子中同时出现 were engaged 和 will choose 一个句子出现两个谓语动词,请问如何改正?

0月袭小姐052 2023-03-20 17:32

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  ____繁華依舊

  2023-03-20 18:12

  下面句子中同时出现 were engaged 和 will choose 一个句子出现两个谓语动词,请问如何改正?some jobs of high risk and hard strength were engaged will choosemale instead of female

  Some jobs that engaging high risk and hard strength are better chosen by male but female.

  我觉得jobs来选择人不太好吧,主动语态是不是不合适?

  去掉were ,engaged 做后置定语

  这个句子本身就有语病啊

  Some jobs that engaging high risk and hard strength are better chosen by male but female.

  我觉得jobs来选择人不太好吧，主动语态是不是不合适？
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