英语小句纠错!1呵呵,本人在写memo.但是因为我的语法和用词不是太好,希望大侠们帮小弟批改批改,I am writing this memo because I want you to know organization is responsible to the society and environment.
i am writing this memo to remind you that (in my opinion) organization is responsible to the society and environment.
这样可能更简洁一些.因为不定式本身可表目的.告诉对方 你写memo的目的是什么
I am writing this memo because I want you to know that organizations have a responsibility to the society and environment.
because改为since比较好
语法都正确但表达上后者好些
an organization that/which is responsible for the