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______純銀se 2023-03-17 14:33

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  _melody_200

  2023-03-17 14:48

  帮你稍作改动，这样读起来比较顺畅。后面的treasured显得太严重了……用liked就行，看你自己选择了。Todayitwasmyfirsttimetohaveacupoftea,whichwasspecialforme.IseldomdrankteabecauseIthoughtitwasbitterandexpensive.OnedaysomeonetoldmeabouttheTieguanyin,akindoftea,tastedslightlysweetandgood.Beforethesummerholiday,myfriendsentmemanybagsofTieguanyin.Itreasuredthembecausetheycamefrommyeverbestfriend.Totellyouthetruth,theteawassweet.

  1 Several years ago, when we were only noticing the speed of the increasing in economic, we cerntainly did not know the Wall Street would bring such a big crisis to us. 2 the number of the tourists has decreased by 15 percent, with the income of tourism dropping down seriously. 3 We think countries in Latin America should come together to negotiate with the EU in exports and imports, to vindicate our vested interests.4 we raised the housing fund of non-tenant to 5 million dollars---------------------------------------------------------------改了下语法错误,但是似乎并不怎么地道

  1 Several years ago, when we were only noticing the speed of the increase in economy, we surely didn't know the Wall Street would bring such a big crisis to us. 2 the number of tourists has decreased by 15 percent, with the income of tourism dropping seriously. 3 We think countries in Latin America should come together to negotiate with the EU about exports and imports, to vindicate our vested interests. 4 we have increased the housing fund of non-tenant to 5 million dollars

  TodaywasthefirsttimeIhadacupoftea,,whichwasspecialforme.Iseldomdrinktea,becauseIthoughtitwasbitterandexpensive.ButsomeonetoldmetheabouttheTieguanyin,akindofteawhichtasteslightlysweetandgood.Beforethesummerholiday,myfriendsentmemanysmallbagsofTieguanyintea.Itreasuredthembecausetheyarefrommybestfriend.Oh,howsweetwasthetea!

  TodayIhadacupoftea,whichwasthefirsttimeandwasspecialforme.Iseldomdranktea,becauseIthoughtitwasbitterandexpensive,butsomeonetoldmethatTieguanyin,akindoftea,tastesslightlysweetandgood.Beforethesummerholiday,myfriendsentmemanysmallbagsoftieguanyintea.Itreasuredthembecausetheywerefrommyeverbestfriend.Theteawasreallysweet.
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